Tuesday, 1 May 2018

The Door

2 comments:

  1. Hi Maya,Marnie here,I like how you explained what you thought was in the house,Next time you could re read it because you said there was a door and a sentence down you said there was a door.It looks like you worked hard on this piece of writing.Keep posting on your blog.
    Kind Regards
    Marnie.

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  2. hi Maya it is Rose i like how you talked about the animals and lots of other thing. From Rose

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