Thursday 4 April 2019

Animals

This was my writing that I did on Monday this week it was very fun to do as well because we describe a photo and that made it a little bit easy.
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  1. Michelle Phelps4 April 2019 at 20:06

    Hi Maya - I can see that you worked hard to include adverbs; sneakily and lazily. I am glad using the picture helped you. How else could you write your sentences so that they don't all start with 'the'? It's great to see you have used punctuation correctly.

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